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Deer Cheryl Snell
Rigid felt a poke in his ribs and blinked. “What do
you want?” “Just look at Coiner over there! Just look at him!”
Scept growled in astonishment. Rigid rubbed his eyes and yawned. In the middle of the gravelly shoal squatted Coiner, watchfully
gazing into the dancing wavelets. Now and then he turned some bigger stones around. “So what?” mumbled Rigid sulkily. “The
lad is looking for bullheads that hide under stones. Did you really have to wake me up for that?” “I didn’t mean that!” Scept was getting
excited. “You just missed it, damn you! You just keep on watching him and you’ll understand what I mean.” Now Linger joined them from behind. “What are you looking
at?” “Shut up. Just be quiet,” hissed Scept. “You’ll
see it soon.” A few more men soon collected behind them. Endur, the oldest
among them, gasped uneasily. At a distance, a group of women were occupied with the last bites of a meal. Rigid wearily glanced
at Coiner but he was still worked on searching for fish. It seemed that blockhead even preferred them over meat. The tiny voices of his wife Ilala and her inseparable friend
Berry wafted over to Rigid’s ears. The women’s chattering suddenly stopped and Rigid’s
gaze was attracted to them. They were staring, all of them, in surprise in the same direction--at the shoal. Ilala was covering
her mouth as if suppressing a shriek. Rigid felt the convulsive grasp of Scept’s hand on his upper arm. From behind
them, they heard Endur uttering a guttural groan. Linger also looked in shock toward the shoal, surprise dropping his lower
jaw earthwards. “Well? Do you see it now?” Scept’s voice
was full of stifled triumph. “Have any of you, has anybody ever seen such a thing? Huh?” “That’s awful,” agreed Linger. “That’s
really awful.” “I can’t believe my own eyes,” Array agreed
and Silent tacitly and continually shook his head in denial of what he’d seen. The others found a stump for Endur to
sit on. His weak joints had given out. “This … this can’t be good,” growled
Endur finally. “Oh, no--no good can come of this. I’m an old man and I’ve seen many things in my life. I’ve
been all around, even up to the horizon ... but I’ve never even heard of anything like this.” His trembling voice
slowly died away and finally faded into a weak whisper. “Listen--shall we just watch all this calmly and quietly?”
Scept’s voice was full of irritation. “We mustn’t allow such a shameless rascal--I don’t know how
to put this--well, how can we let him mock us like this? How can we let him just insult us like this?” “There, there,” Rigid soothingly dropped in to
the exchange. “We know that young people are always up to something. And that Coiner is a particularly romping lad.
The best we can do is to pretend we didn’t notice anything strange. He’ll cut it out on his own soon enough.” “And what if he doesn’t?” asked Scept in
rash opposition. “What if all the other youngsters start to imitate him? Can you imagine what would happen then?” “I think Scept is right,” said Array. “What
do you say, Silent?” “Why are you asking that imbecile?” interrupted
Scept. “You know he has no opinion about anything. And even if he does have one, you can never drag it out of him. Endur,
you tell us what we could expect from that ... from that–” He shoved a scornful finger in Coiner’s direction. “If that spreads,” mumbled the old man, “oh,
if that plague extends, all our customs will be threatened.” “Then you say,” said Linger eagerly, “what
Coiner is doing is more than just another crazy idea? What do you think could happen?” “The youth will start scoffing at the traditions of
our ancestors until nothing more stays sacred.” Endur caught his breath and fought with the rasping cough. Then he waved
his hand like it would be senseless to waste more words on the topic. “I think you’re exaggerating a bit,” said
Rigid. “What can be so evil about such an imp–” He cut himself off because he had noticed Ilala gazing at
Coiner in astonishment. Her look was sheer admiration: eyes wide open, her mouth broadened into a smile, the half-eaten fruit
dropped out of her hand. “Hey!” Rigid’s warning woke Ilala out of
her rapture. She lowered her gaze and docilely retreated behind Rigid’s back. “Now you see where this leads?” asked Scept triumphantly.
“It takes just one bad example like that to pollute all the innocent ones! I say we banish Coiner, get him far away
from here--at once and forever!” “Yeah!” grumbled Linger wrathfully. Array agreed too, and Silent didn’t disagree; his gaze
remained as obtuse as always. “Damnation, damnation, damnation ...” repeated
the gloomy Endur. “Well, Rigid?” asked Scept, and poked him in
the ribs again. Rigid nodded to him in silence. Enough was enough. Who knew
what would happen if everyone started behaving like this? He shuddered at the thought. With all the others, Rigid morosely, but with a mild, curious
envy, watched Coiner, who still hadn’t descended to all fours like he should have. Coiner pressed some of the bullheads
he had caught with two paws into his chest, overgrown with dense brown fur. Still tottering, but self-confident, he walked upright on
his two posterior limbs.
CONTRIBUTORS: Stephanie Kemp
is a 32 year old poet originally from Seattle, Washington. She currently lives in Aurora, Colorado where she works for the
city government. In her spare time she continues work on her first book of poetry. She has been published in Black Diaspora
Magazine, Poetry Motel, The Armchair Aesthete, Foliate Oak, Flutter, Struggle, Remark and other publications. She has been
writing poetry for about 10 years. Felino Soriano
lives in California where he is employed as a behavioral assistant; he is also currently studying philosophy. Through his
occupation, he is able to counsel, care for and learn from developmentally disabled adults. Classic and avant-garde jazz are
muses. His poetry has appeared or is forthcoming in several online journals including Blaze VOX, Ygdrasil, Bergen Street Review,
Houston Literary Review, Persistent Mirage, among others. Cory Mesler
has been a book reviewer, fiction editor, university press sales rep, grant committee judge, father, and son. He and his wife
own Burke’s Book Store, one of the country’s oldest (1875) and best independent bookstores. He has published prose
and/or poetry in Turnrow, Adirondack Review, American Poetry Journal, Paumanok Review, Yankee Pot Roast, Monday Night, Elimae,
H_NGM_N, The Journal of Experimental Fiction, Poet Lore, Forklift OH, Euphony, Rattle, Jabberwock Review, Dicey Brown, Cordite,
Cellar Door, others. He can be found at www.coreymesler.com Jack Swenson
is a California writer and teacher. His third book of stories Local Hero is available from the publisher at iuniverse.com
and at amazon.com. Many of his tales have appeared in online and print journals including ken*again, Pindeldyboz, The Smoking
Poet, Flash Flooding, Underground Voices and Taj Mahal Review. Natalie Lorenzo
is a 25 year old poet from the East coast. She was recently published in the online journal Thick With Conviction.
She mostly writes out of enjoyment and relaxation.Cheryl Snell’s books include Flower Half Blown, Epithalamion
and Shiva’s Arms. She is a three-time Pushcart Prize nominee. She blogs at http://snellsisters.blogspot.com. Edward Rodosek
is a writer from Slovenia in the European Union. His work has been published in the U.S., Canada, and the U.K. |